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Blind

by: NarutoAddict765

Gorgeous golden sun
Bright green grass
Cool blue lakes
Forest trees
Cars
Buildings
Everything seen
Cherished
Treasured,
Pure beauty.

In a snap of a finger,
gone...
vanished.
blocked

and
blackened.

nothing...

you can only hear
only feel
this beauty
but to feel and hear,
just depresses you.

You can't even picture
the miraculous changes in life.
Your wonderful friends,
and how they grow.
You can't even gaze
into your true loves eyes
you can't even picture...

you.
yourself.
©2008-2010 ~NarutoAddict765
:iconnarutoaddict765:

Author's Comments

Self Explanitory...I don't have any idea what I'd do if I were blind.

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:iconfred5046:
my god.. where do you bet your ideas!!!

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:iconnarutoaddict765:
I dunno, they're really hard to find :P thank you so much for all of the favorites and for adding me to your friends list. :P :hug: :glomp:

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I really like how you presented this poem, and just what it's about. Good job!
I really didn't like these lines:
you can only hear
only feel
this beauty
but to feel and hear,
just depresses you.

Not sure why, it just sounds odd...Get what I mean?
I love the end though. Great job!

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You need to be broken because pain is the only thing that is certain.

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